The green sewage pipe
Walt.:To use adjectives to describe objects
SC:I can use 3 adjectives to describe objects.
One day I was swimming in Lake Taupo.When I jumped of the wharf I felt something scrape the bottom of my foot.But I didn't care because I just wanted to swim.I swam along the rips of the big waves. Then suddenly feel me getting sucked into this yuck mossy ugly green pipe. I carefully tried not to get myself hurt but the current was too strong I just couldn't get myself out of here.I just let the current take me.Lucky the water was low enough for me to breath.When I got free I saw this beautiful white geared horse.
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Good use of adjectives. Excellent use of verbs to describe actions. You have outlined the event well. I really like your description of the pipe. Excellent use of three adjectives. I can see you have paid attention to using fullstops.
ReplyDeleteNext time, reread your work to make sure it makes sense. You are creating some excellent 100wc texts. Finally, you have kept within your word limit.
Miss Turner
Room P
Turaki Primary School
Taumarunui